My last elevator pitch was on a completely different idea, so the feedback that I got on it is pretty much irrelevant. One thing that I was told was to not rock back and forth too much because it was distracting. I really paid attention to my body language in this elevator pitch.
Hi Rachel!
ReplyDeleteI actually love going to the grocery, but I do agree that going to an actual grocery store while dealing with a busy schedule can sometimes be a hassle. I think that having a laid out and organized system would really help- I love the part where you said "it will make shopping a pleasure" even though it did remind me of Publix! Check out my post if you have time: http://kristianasimon.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3-week-10.html
Rachel, great elevator pitch! You're elevator pitch was entertaining and you used your hands just enough. Overall, I think your idea is really good and would be super successful especially in large cities or a college town even. I would definitely use your app! Check out my blog http://carolinemurray4343.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHey Rachel,
ReplyDeleteThanks for your sharing your blog and this video, I really enjoyed watching it. I think your idea is great, I wish you would have gone into more detail however. Especially regarding how this app differs from already existing ones. Besides that, I think you did a good job, keep up the good work! Here is the link to my blog, you should check it out when you get the chance!http://ent3003nicole.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html