This elevator pitch is about an app called "Lets Hang". An app geared toward friendship and matching people up with others that have the same interests. Instead of looking for an intimate relationship, those using this app will be looking for a platonic relationship.
Every single comment I received on my last elevator pitch was a comment about the business idea itself, and not personally about me or my elevator pitch. So I had nothing to reflect on about improvement or change. Sorry:(
I think your idea is amazing. Technology, and friendships are a really good combination. On the other side, i like the way you introduced your product. Everything was very dynamic and interesting. what i think that differentiate your app from others is the main objective of finding a friend online ( which sometimes can be weird ) but most of the times it works. in my case i have never met someone that i talked to online. However, i am sure some others have.
Keep the good work and hope to see your app running in a blink
Here is my Pitch http://heosorio.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
I just want to say that I love your blazer. The color is so pretty. As for the idea itself, I’ve heard of parody’s of it on Facebook and just googled it – that idea already exists. It’s an app called Hey! VINA. (http://heyvina.com/) Maybe third times the charm? Lol. Your pitch is perfect. It’s just the idea that needs a bit of tweaking. The only advice that I have on your pitch is to not move back and forth too much. It’s just a tiny bit distracting. Other than that, great job.
Here is my pitch: http://nataliem775.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi Rachel! This is a really fun idea! I really liked your delivery of your pitch! I liked the hook and how you started off asking questions to get the audience intrigued. You also did not seem nervous at all and you looked professional and poised. Here is a link to my blog if you want to check it out! http://thereseverything.blogspot.com/2016/02/theres-my-elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hello Rachel, This is a really cool Idea. I especially like the name for it. Lets hang is a really catchy name that will be able to get caught in peoples minds very easily. Great work on the assignment! here is a link to my blog: http://ksnihur.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Rachel!!
ReplyDeleteI think your idea is amazing. Technology, and friendships are a really good combination. On the other side, i like the way you introduced your product. Everything was very dynamic and interesting. what i think that differentiate your app from others is the main objective of finding a friend online ( which sometimes can be weird ) but most of the times it works. in my case i have never met someone that i talked to online. However, i am sure some others have.
Keep the good work and hope to see your app running in a blink
Here is my Pitch
http://heosorio.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Rachel,
ReplyDeleteI just want to say that I love your blazer. The color is so pretty. As for the idea itself, I’ve heard of parody’s of it on Facebook and just googled it – that idea already exists. It’s an app called Hey! VINA. (http://heyvina.com/) Maybe third times the charm? Lol. Your pitch is perfect. It’s just the idea that needs a bit of tweaking. The only advice that I have on your pitch is to not move back and forth too much. It’s just a tiny bit distracting. Other than that, great job.
Here is my pitch:
http://nataliem775.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi Rachel! This is a really fun idea! I really liked your delivery of your pitch! I liked the hook and how you started off asking questions to get the audience intrigued. You also did not seem nervous at all and you looked professional and poised.
ReplyDeleteHere is a link to my blog if you want to check it out! http://thereseverything.blogspot.com/2016/02/theres-my-elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hello Rachel, This is a really cool Idea. I especially like the name for it. Lets hang is a really catchy name that will be able to get caught in peoples minds very easily. Great work on the assignment! here is a link to my blog: http://ksnihur.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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